My own dark/emo quotes. what do you think?

Question

here are some quotes i made and like.i hope they are thought prevoking. tell me what you think, or key in on specific ones you like or dislike. thanks!

~I'm dying slowly, but aren't we all?~

~The pain is contagious, as are you~

~Your words cut deeper than my blade~

~Between your words and my end~

~Shattering on the way down and I dont hit the ground~

~Tearing my heart open just to feel~

Answer 1

i love them all especialy the 3rd one ..... words can cut deeper han blades sometimes ,and yes we are all dying slowly ..... good job

Answer 2

i dont really like them.

Answer 3

That last one sounds a bit like a rip off of Papa Roach...shame shame.

Answer 4

I like the first one, it's almost a parody of the entire lifestyle.. For the scene, DIY, pain, and becoming a minority.. Only to become the opposition- The norm. The majority...

But at least everyone can still hide their pain behind their razor slashed bangs.

Answer 5

they were nice.....but feel like u can do better