My poem, "Sorry I Sold Your Soul On Ebay"?

Question

I was a little intoxicated when I wrote it. I thought it was cute for a 5-minute poem. Whadya think?

I was walking to my house

When I saw you in the crowd

Of the early morning Church junkies

See, the night before

You were dealing at your door

And you sold me some really bad “skunk” weed

You can imagine my delight

‘Cause I was thinking of the right

Way to seek sweet retaliation

Seems you value your soul

And I knew it was gold

It was just too strong a temptation

Sorry I sold your soul on ebay

It was a joke, no harm intended

I didn’t know someone who was a dealer

Could be so extremely religious

I can tell you’re upset

But in truth, I’m appalled

And I think you are overreacting

Still, if you want it that bad

There’s no need to get mad

Just take a road trip to Greene County

It didn’t really sell for a lot

And the buyer probably thought

It was just a joke, but he did say

That he was a Satanist,

And he hopes it won’t missed

Well you never used your soul anyway

Sorry I sold your soul on Ebay

As it appears you won’t be getting it back

And if you spend eternity in purgatory

Well, at least me and my mates got a laugh :]

Answer 1

This is really good! It deffinately brightened my day. Keep on writing stuff like this its good.

Answer 2

That is really good actually. One of the better poems I have ever read on YA. You should write while drunk more often. It probably won't win any awards or anything, but it is definitely cute and clever.

Answer 3

Cruel.. but very witty for someone who was intoxicated.

:D