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My poem ' DREAM' for my bf. What do you think? What can you draw from it? Your interpretations?

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DREAM

It was a dirty piece of candy.

A coin wedged underneath.

Pointless stuffing in a pillow.

Born with two broken legs.

Walking sticks are futile.

In a world hungry for sin.

When life rips away my life.

I remember, my life is him.

In a chaos of reflections.

When he's inside, deep within.

I surrender my weapon to him.

Ongoing peace in our war.

Kisses cure a cold cancer.

Touches calm a monster.

He's so beautiful in my arms.

Eyes of a boy, the skin of a man.

l**k of a snake, tug on the chest.

I know, the child will never die.

The worst and best, test of fate.

Disorder of Ares-Apollo, test of patience.

Test of our fate, dare to hate.

Brushing grey long hair ,once a sun.

Trimming his grey beard, still a moon.

I want him till death and beyond.

This is my dream

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  1. Sounds like you have a great love for your friend which spans a lifetime.  Such a rare beauty!  Excellent write!  Astounding read!


  2. very good I love it it says a lot About everthing. just how you feel about ur boyfriend. its amazing!!!!!

  3. This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!

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