My poem Hellbound what do you think?

Question

Last night i woke from a dream ' shaking and shivering as it was quite obscene.

I dreamt that I had wasted my life' just barely living

thinking it was alright.

I seen mothers with babies all running around as i stood with my longest face and a big *** frown.

I sat and thought for a really long time' why i never married and hear some laughter around.

I sat and pondered and searched within'why i never smiled and been happy within.

The angels stared for awhile and said honey' it's because your a child and very dead.I ran and jumped all around' it all came to me that this is h**l and the fire and brimstone' was like nothing i had seen around.

I looked up and prayed ' and whispered why' never is it me'

just because i was molested at three.

Now i see my life as it passed me by ' as in h**l no friends and no outside.

I wander all day in the hot pits of h**l' as daily i puke from this hot burning flesh.

Answer 1

You gotta try to let that past go. Live for today. The past can`t hurt you unless you let it. You sound like a beautiful and smart woman. Look ahead. Stay with us in the present. We need you Cami. And we all care about you.

Answer 2

Whoa this is a creepy but great poem and i liked it so much.I go for darker type poems and this is right up my isle.

Answer 3

very wild and wicked Cami!