My poem: called The Ghost Cowboy?

Question

He was shadow of the trees

The Sunlight dancing on the breeze

He was there - and gone

Like a fading song

So long ago sung;

The fading beat of a drum

He rode the horse in the fair

It was a simple dare

To see if he won

He did - it was all said and done

He won

He was done

does that sound alright? Please helpful comments and suggestions on how i should further this poem

thanx

Answer 1

it was good

Answer 2

i dont think you need to change anything it was really good

Answer 3

get the ghost cowboy to drive a ghost cattle train,way out in the desert where there is never any rain,  and live in a ghost town, whenever the ghost cowboy comes around make sure there are a few ghost cowgirls in town, seeing that the ghost cowboy is not a ghost clown, have him  be in a few showdowns, and shootouts, seems you want to tell how the cowboy got to be a ghost  cause people will want to know that the most

get him to be in the indian's attack,  , where the indians do the ghost dance and and put an arrow in the ghost cowboys back, but it goes rigth throuh, and the ghost cowboy turns out to be you, sitting in his saddle, riding on the range, through sand and sage,  now do something with those words to make the ghost cowboy poem all the rage,    have everyone talk and say, did you read that hep poem about the ghost cowboy today?      

did he have one or two six guns, did he shoot up the saloon just for fun, was he from the law on the run,    tell how the ghost cowboy did shoot and never miss the target, how he never ran out of bullets and how he could shoot in the dark,      all you could see from the ghost cowboys gun were the  sparks,          

make it sound like this ghost cowboy has a ghost of a chance, when he rides into town all alone to win the ghost cowgirl and save all the town from the bad guys and win at romance,