My poem comment ??? tell me what you think please???

Question

Dont Leave!!!

The pain it hurts.

Deep down inside.

In my heart, in my mind.

In my soul & in my life.

From dusk till dawn.

This pain is all night long.

I try to forget what's inside.

But I can't get these thoughts out of my mind.

I sit here waiting.

For what i don't know.

One day it will come.

But when i will never know.

This needs to be said.

This needs to be heard.

So listen now!

I'm shouting out.

Take my hand.

Hold it tight.

Don't let go.

Maybe, ill be alright.

Leave me not.

For ill get scared.

It's too late you're gone.

For that i was not prepared.

Answer 1

I think it's great, you should be a poet!

Answer 2

good one

Answer 3

What is wonderful is that you have found the creative source to survival and self expression. You are hurting right now, and maybe feel alone and misunderstood. The fact that you can write a poem about it and publish it on line says to me that you will be just fine through life........you will always be an emotional creature with a creative and dramatic flair. Yup, you are a poet.

Answer 4

lovely just beautifully written, it tells of one yearnin to be heard so self absorbed in pain that the only one who loves or so said is gone. I have been thru this and your words are true. Just hold your head up and when you be true to yourself the rest will follow thru.