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My poem for the day? War?

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Our sons, our daughters;

whose lives have been lost,

they volunteered freely;

but at what cost?

No one is winning;

its just death throughout the land,

as the world sits by idle,

sitting on their hands

We've dug ourselves a grave,

in which we might not get out,

deeper though, yet deeper

soon no one will hear us shout,

both men say, they want an end

but now it is to late

we've pushed our luck to often

we've opened up h***s gate.

If we stop now, they'll hit us hard

try to even up the score;

generations will die, again and again

due to this senseless war.

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  1. Great poem!


  2. Your poem is very true

    it talks about the thousands of men

    and women who lose their lives

    at War.

    These soldiers from the wars

    are either killed in battle or

    crippled for life

    Your poem reminds me of the remembrance

    day service I go to each year

    In wars no one wins

    people are always losing

    by paying the price

    When people continually take chances

    and gamble with life.

    In war there is no winning

  3. Excellent, Castian

    Very powerful and you really should get this one published. This one should be shared with everyone. Not just people here on Yahoo answers.

    The thing I found the most intriguing was in the first of the poem it sounded like it was talking about Anti-war then you took it to the direction it is to late we have opened up h***s gates which is precisely what we have done That's a strong statement that really hits hard. Nice job

    I would make a suggestion for another title since there are so many titled War. It's just a suggestion but I believe I would title it  "We Can't Go Back Now" That is what I was thinking when I finished reading it for the first time..

    Always remember to be sure and get a your poems copy righted before allowing anyone to use them. Keep up the good work.

  4. that is really good. i like it a lot!!!!!!!!!! its really has an awsome message.

  5. This is really good...Know exactly where your coming from my boyfriend is a marine, It seems like it is never going to end. He deploys in about a month. This is a great poem!

  6. its realy good but "h***s gate has been open sincne the world began.................I'm not lyin'.

  7. that is very good.

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