My poem "She's like the moon" comments comments please =p?

Question

She's like the moon

And orbit my heart to lovers tune

My earth she's the only one

And still look when nights gone,

Fill and fill my sky afar

And silver in night you are

Far away she's like the moon

And orbit my heart to lovers tune,

Come close to hither

And eclipse me but never wither

She's a star not of another

And my heart goes to my lover.

Answer 1

this is really and truely enjoyable!

you should consider getting these published or printed!

Well done, its creative and really proffessional!

xxxbest of luck! keep writing!x*x

Answer 2

Hi, hey nice poem here, a couple minor editing suggestions for you (use them if you like):

She's like the moon

Orbits my heart to a lover’s tune

My earth as well she's the only one

And still I look up when night is gone,

Fill and fill my sky afar

Silver in the night you are

Far away she's like the moon

Orbits my heart to a lover’s tune

Come hither

And eclipse me, never wither

She's a star not of another

And my heart goes to my lover.

Answer 3

above average.

Answer 4

awhh, cuuuute! I like it!

Answer 5

NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! ER A PRO AT POEMS