My poem read n discuss please free points?

Question

even thought he gave us pain

we will not die in pity or vain

the sun will not force us dry

the rain shall not make us cry

he may be man but we woman are strong

when he is right we are not always wrong

we are not a storage a bag nor a cave

we fed the hungry and freed the slaves

we mad miracles encore and encore

we ened the depression and won the wars

and sorry mr president we rule the state

i mean look at us we wear dresses and skate

so when ever he says your nothing

laugh and say im the reason your something

Answer 1

Like I said before, it's very good, and now that I think about it, quite empowering to women. I like it a lot.

Answer 2

I enjoy feminist poetry and I love that last line, however, I would replace "skate" with a different word...sounds very forced.

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