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My random poem?

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a bright light

should i flee or fight?

i drop my kite

my face drains of blood and looks white

i drop my key

but feel no more free

i sprint and run and speedily escape

but the light is faster and slowly like a cape

it attaches to me i cant seem to shift it

i cry scream and pull at it

i look up and realise its only her

my love

my life

my painting of perfection

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  1. It's decent try ryhming every other line, and always what ever you start with end with the same ryhme.  like love end of first line, your last line dove. It doesn't have to be same word, but it should rhyme.


  2. It doesn't have to rhyme!

    If your poem is only thinking about putting a word afterwards that rhymes it will end up awful. You've got the feeling right tho. Keep working at it, and get your Captial Letters and Commas in there, it always makes it look less scratchy and more professional!
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