My short poem ---- "Beloved Grandpa"?

Question

I'm 15 and this is a poem i just wrote. i can only write poems about things that touched my heart, things i will never forget. This poem is dedicated to my Grandpa who died last year of Bowel Cancer.

"Beloved Grandpa"

Death came,

It took him away,

My beloved Grandpa,

I wish he could stay,

His heart had paused,

Stopped for too long,

Before we knew it,

He was gone,

Months went by,

Feels like he’s here,

I stop for a second,

To have a peer,

I search around me,

Hoping for the chance,

To possible see him,

Just a quick glance,

Grandpa wasn’t there,

He never will be,

I get on with my life,

Knowing he’s looking down on me.

Please read it and comment.

Answer 1

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