My study partner gave me a 2 for this sat essay. on a scale of 1 to 6.I'm pissed. Please grade it fo

Question

r me and tell me where i need to improve.

Answer 1

well it deserves more than a 2 of course..but y is it this short...?  

Answer 2

That's atleast a 10 in my opinion but I suggest you to take the testmasters SAT prep course so you can learn good essay formats.

Answer 3

The length is good and so are the examples. However, it seems to stray a little from the original question. I would probably give it a 3 or 4.

Answer 4

3 or 4. God intro and conclusion, as well as good examples. However, you don't always relate your examples directly to the topic. additionally, SAT essay graders love personal experiences used as examples. At times your grammar is confusing.Your should use more varied sentence structures and a higher level of vocabulary.