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My summer vacation composition?

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please help me. i had problems on where should i start and end my composition. our teacher asked us to write a composition about our summer vacation.

my parents and i went to our country because we hadn't seen my brother and sister for three years.

also, please give me an outline. example: paragraph 1 - what am i going to write here? paragraph 2.. 3.. 4.. so on and so forth.

please help me. GOOD ANSWER 10 POINTS

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  1. This summer was especially memorable for me, because it was the first time in 3 years that my entire family was reunited.  My parents and I went back to our home country to see my brother and sister.

    1. talk about the traveling arrangements to your country, how had the country changed? was it dangerous? had the politics changed?

    2. describe the first encounter with your brother & sister. Joyful, chaotic, tearful, funny, sad?

    3. describe your sister. Had she changed? was she well? what had she been doing in the last 3 years? how did she describe you? had you changed? what did she say?

    4. describe your brother. same things

    5. what are some particularly memorable moments during the summer and why

    6. describe the final goodbyes and the plans for when you will see them again.

    7. perhaps conclude with some sort of meaningful comment about the value of family and the importance of these types of reunion events, even if it takes a lot of planning & expense.

    Good luck. Happy writing!


  2. So if all of these points are given what contribution will you make?

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