My teacher gave me pargraph about characteristics of good teacher I would like everyone correct it for me?

Question

There are many important characteristics of good teacher .first, if you are knowing person, you will know what to teach and how to teach. Second, friendly means making us to do the best. If you are friendly you will enjoy working and that make you feel better in your life . Third, helpful to help the student when they have problem in school or out of school .also help student to accomplish their goals. In short, the important characteristics of good teacher are knowing ,friendly , and helpful.

Answer 1

Not bad!  How long have you been learning English?  Just some minor proofreading issues; I've proofread your paragraph below.

There are many important characteristics of a good teacher.  First, if you are a knowledgeable person, you will know what to teach and how to teach.  Second, being friendly will make us do our best. If you are friendly, you will enjoy working and that will make you feel better in your life. Third, you must be helpful to help the student when they have problems, both in school and out of school.  Also, you must help student to accomplish their goals. In short, the important characteristics of good teacher are being knowledgeable, friendly, and helpful.