My updated Exodia OTK yugioh deck~please fix if needed?

Question

Monsters:

5 pieces of exodia

2 manticore of darkness

1 spirit reaper~wish i had a marshmallon

Spells:

3 card of safe return

3 upstart goblin

3 soul exchange

2 messenger of peace

2 guard penalty

2 foolish burial

1 level limit area B

1swords of reveling light

1 giant trunade (for beating their set traps)

1 brain control

1 scape goat

Traps:

3 waboku

3 threatening roar

2 malfunction

2 generation shift

1 gravity bind

1 transmigration prophecy

Strategy:

get manticore of darkness on the field via soul exchange, brain control or foolish burial. Play card of safe return, and if you used soul exchange or brain control activate generation shift, retrieving another manticore. Then during the end phase activate manticore's effect keep summoning the two and draw your whole deck.

No c**p about yugioh.

Thanks

Answer 1

You need some more 2000+ defenders to hold off your opponent while you try to gather Exodia.

Answer 2

could use exoidd master of gard

exodia the ultimate forbidden loard

exodia neckros

call of the forbidden one

Answer 3

as is fine. a bit slow tho. take out 1 soul exchange. add in 3 reckless greed