This poem is called Mystic Light of Death. I want to know how to improve this or your thoughts on this or both.
Beyond Death
I journey through the valleys of eternity
With other fallen souls.
Master
Grant me your guiding flame
So that I may see
And rise again.
He is with me
Even in the darkest chambers of my eternal mind.
Death, I am with him.
And he is in my eyes.
I am the feeling of Victory
The Light and the Spirit of Emptiness.
Sword against sword
Death against True Light
I am the Forceful Purpose
The True Meaning
And
The Destroyer of Life.
The Night is dark
But, come with me
I'll give you Light.
When the shadows
Of end times are prevailing
Come with me
And I'll be with you
Forever.
I see your -your weary eyes
Come, I have rest.
Inside my heart are lies
But youre too blind.
Come with me
And accept Death!
Come!
Come with me
And accept Light!
Death - Master
He has given me the guiding flame.
You must carry it on.
Forever
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