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Ok well my changing my idea for the story. You can go to my page and read my last idea.

This guy owns a horse who got pregnant. A girl goes finds the mare and falls in love with her. She asks the guy if she can buy the mare. The guy says no. (the guy is someone who doesnt take care of horses, and the mare is very unhealthy) So the little girl just visits the horse every day. She gains her trust, then she gives birth to the foal. The girl also falls in love with the foal. Then about a yr later the mother dies from under nurishment, and ends up stealing the foal before the same thing happens to it. she gets in a lot of trouble and her dad makes a deal the owner. then the girl trains the yearling to ride and eventually to jump.

what do you think? I agree with what you guys said on the blind thing.

but still might do a story kind of like it.

Im not to sure on how much i like that idea so tell me what you think.

and i havent watched Charlottes web so im not sure if that might be likeit

Answer 1

It sounds very interesting and a good start!

Answer 2

wow sounds like a good story!

Answer 3

I love your story idea...keep working on it.

Answer 4

i really like it! sounds good! =D

Answer 5

How about the girl having some hardship in her life as well, it could form a nice correlation with the history of the foal and add another dimension to the story. Maybe she has mean parents, or a good friend has moved away - something that connects her emotions with the foals.

Great start, you realise we'll all want a copy....:)