Need free thinkers ?

Question

Howz my poem.

God you are a sucker

You always need a bootlicker

Your follower is a bloodsucker or more appropriately an undertaker

Crashing planes into skyscraper

I can be a hooker or a drunker,

But never be your worshipper.

You think of yourself as lawmaker

But don't forget our scientists are great hackers

Will expose you as a great Joker

This world need freethinkers

Not believers, never and ever.

Answer 1

Let me get 2 points out of this

Answer 2

That is so terrible and anti-religion, I'll give it 5 minutes...!

Answer 3

that was really something! it reminds me of this one girls writing style in my class. i think it would be much better if read out loud. it liked the forth stanza, but the second one is kind of ... out there. fix that and this would be one kick-*** poem!

Answer 4

Whichever way you look at it, IT SUCKS!