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Need help to correct this application, if you can make it better and what else should i add to it?

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My objective is improvement within. I agree with the saying "there’s always room for improvement", accordingly if we work hard the outcome will be the best & likewise if we be determined to our goal/job certainly there would be no room for improvement to escape us. I like to progress as I move towards my career objective which is to be a successful first-rate lawyer to progressively improve and shine. I desire to be able to work at a law firm that recognizes that I am a dedicated, well-organized and hard working professional. This is my long term goal in which ill place all my effort into try to achieve. I want to study at Victoria University because it is a well respected and efficient tertiary that will assist me in attaining my career objective and allow me to represent individuals in the future that require aid, to also be able to attend the hierarchy courts not only to witness it but to present my case. To have the opportunity to experience the formal and intense atmosphere that each court has to offer. I think I will succeed because of my determination to want to improve, and through previous studies my interest for the course has just thrived I will not only do all the required work that the course has to offer but I will set a high degree of effort into it also.

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  1. I'm confused, is there a question in there aside from the first sentence?

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