Need help w/ writing "intent to vacate" letter to landlord?

Question

I asked this same question earlier, and based on responses from Yahoo Answers viewers, I have revised my "intent to vacate" letter to my landlord. I appreciate all responses, but am again asking for help with this letter as well.

Thanks again in advance.

(my name)

(my current address)

(my phone number)

July 30, 2008

(landlord company name)

c/o (landlord name)

(landlord business address)

Dear Mr. Smith,

In accordance with our month-to-month rental agreement, please find this letter as my formal 30 days written notice to vacate the premises at (apartment address).

Persuant to Ohio Revised Code 5321.16, I would greatly appreciate the return of my security deposit of $450 within 30 days of vacating the premises. Please forward the return of my security deposit to the following address:

(my name)

(my future address)

If you should need to contact me for any reason, please feel free to call me on my cell phone at (x*x) x*x-xxxx.

Sincerely,

(my name

Answer 1

The ONLY other idea that I would have is to give the exact date that you will vacate the premises .....

Also; upon vacating ; take pictures .. lots of pictures so you can prove there was no damage .....

Note: Rent continues until you have given the keys back to the landlord .