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Need help with a title for my poem ? [10 points]?

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Well it's not really a rhyming poem .. most of my poems usually are, but this one isn't, and it explains so much in my life right now;

Im so lost and confused.

I don't know what to think,

& I don't know what I should do.

You said you would never hurt me again.

But now I'm left here hurt, and all alone.

With tears streaming down my face,

I ask myself how you could of ever done this to me.

Was I not good enough to keep you happy ?

Did she give you something, that I didn't ?

I loved you with everything,

I loved you with my life.

But still, you needed more. Much more.

Your choices wrecked me.

There's nothing left of me.

Not even for myself.

You were all of me. Every single part.

And now that I'm without you,

Everything just fell apart.

All that is left, is the pain inside my heart.

But no matter what,

I can't hate you.

I have only myself to blame.

I'm not good enough for you.

You never really loved me.

You've said you did.

But really, you never did.

How could I not even see ?

I'm so blinded by love,

I saw right through.

I thought you loved me.

I thought I meant everything to you.

But maybe I should just move on,

and start off everything new.

I don't want too..

cause I can never stop loving you.

You promised me forever,

But thats a promise I had to break.

it's not my fault, cause you broke it too.

I tried and tried to do what ever it takes,

to make things better for the both of us.

To make us both happy.

But I guess I never did try hard enough.

You don't know how much you hurt me.

How much this hurt me.

You were my life.

My world.

My everything.

And actually, you still are.

But even though I love you,

You still don't love me back.

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  1. I only difference between you and Tommy Lee Jones is that, he was acting two-faced.


  2. lost

  3. "Lost"

    nice peom and hope you feel better

  4. very good poem some day i hope that you become a poetry writer

    okay back to your question :  

      You miss out on my heart or ,broken sorrow , truth hurts the heart in so many ways, or ,ways you can't repay ,or , ways that you can not love me  

  5. dazed and confused.........um heartbreaker. um love isnt....idk...um im tryin to come up with sumtin good. lets see you said....

    i really dont no but i think i helped okish....lol u no i felt like that after this guy dumped me but now we are really good friends.

    o and i really like ur poem. i wish i could rite like u.

  6. As the World Loves and the Sorrow's Return

  7. The Picture of Codependence

  8. Love and Sorrow

    idk

  9. Here are some titles that I think work for your poem:

    Broken Promise

    Lost Love

    The Choice

    Good luck!

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