Need help with my poem?

Question

I need to write a poem for poetry class

Have you ever wondered how is it like to feel like a stranger?

Like a fish out of water ... What else?

Have you ever wondered how is it like to feel lost?

Like a drop in the ocean .. what else?

Have you ever wondered how is it like to feel so confused?

what is it like to be confused?

Have you ever felt so much low?

how?

please HELP!

Answer 1

I think the poem works well as is.

Leave out the please help.

Answer 2

WHAT is it like-not HOW. Or just "how is it to feel....."

"Have you ever felt so low", or low, leave out the "much"

It's a lovely poem.

The please HELP at the end fits in well too-don't know if is part of the poem, but it does work.

Answer 3

Have you ever walked in the shoes of a stranger?

Like a fish out of water surrounded by danger.

Have you ever wondered what it’s like to be lost?

Like a drop in the ocean that’s turned into frost.

Have you ever felt what it’s like so confused?

So lost and alone and hurt and abused.

Have you ever felt so downtrodden and low?

Like a shadow in this life that lived long ago.

Answer 4

it looks pretty good, continue on your own...but a small remark: not..how is it like, but how it is like...:)!!! good luck