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DATE: September 04, 2008

TO: David Curtis, Department Head

FROM: Erika Trinidad, Research Assistant

SUBJECT: NetVizor Software:

FOREWORD

The number of employees of Globe Electronics has greatly increased over the past month. Because of this increase, monitoring the work of the employees are neglected. Recently, we discovered that there are few employees that, instead of doing their job, are busy chatting in the internet. For that reason, our company needs an employee monitoring software.

I was asked by --------- to investigate various employee monitoring programs and to identify the one best suited to company needs.

[and also in the subject. cAN ANYONE HELP ME COMPLETE THE SUBJECT?the right format is this. subject: topic of report: the kind of telling done by this report.]i already have topic of report.but i dont have the other...

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Answer 1

The number of employees of Globe Electronics has greatly increased over the past month. Because of this increase, monitoring the work of employees HAS BEEN neglected. Recently, we discovered that there are A few employees that, instead of doing their job, are busy chatting ON the internet. For that reason, our company needs TO CONSIDER employee monitoring software.

SUBJECT: NetVizor Software: recommendation  

Answer 2

The number of employees of Globe Electronics has greatly increased over the past month. Because of this increase, monitoring the work of the employees HAS BEEN neglected. Recently, we discovered that there are A few employees that, instead of doing their job, are busy chatting ON the internet. For that reason, our company needs an employee monitoring software.