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Question

I wake up

thinking about you every day

And hope it’ll work out

somehow, some way.

you are so beautiful to me

if only you could see

how much i love you

maybe we were meant to be

(i need a middle part thats another thing i need help on)

i want you to know

all my heart could ever do

Is tell you that I’ll always LOVE YOU.

Answer 1

it's cute.... i can't think of a middle part sorry

Answer 2

there isnt enough depth

words like love are used everyday you need to create imagary instead of telling me show me thorugh the words you use.

Answer 3

As I wake up in the morning,

thinking about you every day;

hoping it'll work out,

somehow, some way.

So beautiful,

that's what you are to me;

How much I love you,

I wish you could see.

We were meant to be, that's one thing is so true;

What my heart could ever do, is to tell you I love you.

--- You don't need a middle part here.

    The way you let it out will do the trick.

Answer 4

Its cute, for what it is. Pretty mediocre and cliche.