Need opinions on webpage?

Question

I'm having trouble with a webpage. I have people lots of people viewing the page but no buyers. I would apreciate any opinions and feedback for this particular page. Thanks in advance. Click below for the webpage.

www.smalls257.phpnet.us/starbucks/temp...

Answer 1

I would suggest the inclusion of a picture or two of the goodies that the book will enable you to create. Also I would call it something like a recipe book or something similar rather than a report. (A report sounds like a boring bunch of profit and loss figures.)

I for one don't eat at McDonald's every week so that isn't something that I can miss in order to pay for this book! (You use this twice.) Relate the cost to savings made by making your own muffins and/or drinks rather than buying them at Starbucks. It is probably less than 2 trips to Starbucks!

I presume you included one recipe in the advertising info so that people could try it out and be sure they were getting authentic recipes - why not say that! Your sample recipe doesn't indicate that it makes 4 portions/drinks! (Aren't most people only going to want to make 1!)

Do you have permission to use the Starbucks name? (Because, as I am sure you are aware, it is a registered trademark. If you do then get the copyright symbol and even explain it is part of the reason why you have to charge. If you don't think again!)

What I want to know is what is it you are selling me? (and is it the real thing)

Why should I be interested?

Does my interest make it worthwhile spending the money you want for what you are selling?

I hope some of this helps a little and wish you well.

Answer 2

You need to reset the address above as it is incomplete and therefore won't open.

TB