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Need poem help?

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ok this is what i got i dont know of i wanna add more or not

it is called no one knows

no one know's how much i love you

no one know's what you mean to me

no one know's how much you make me happy

and no one know's how good i feel

when we are together

no one know's what we have

and what we will always have

because are love is true

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  1. when its just me and you


  2. its perfect

  3. to make it flow,

    i think you should add something at the end that rhymes with TRUE

    like.

    " without you i'd be blue "

    " people should get a clue"

    " everything is what i love about you "

    " forever, me and you "

    something like that,

    OR

    along the lines of your own thoughts.

    ( hope i was helpful )
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