Need some feedback on this poem in progress?

Question

I cannot be what needs to be

to make your voice stop hurting me

i let you go, i did my part,

it's like a nail inside my heart.

i really need to let you be

So i can stop hurting me

Answer 1

Hello,

I see this poem has pain in it

because it talks about breaking up

The first line sounded like the other person

had high expectation of you wanting perfection

As painful as it was you broke up

telling her you will let her go

Its like a nail inside my heart

feels more like it was torn out.

You had to let her go so

you can heal.  

Answer 2

The last two lines are everlasting and full of wisdom ♥

Answer 3

Absolutely beautiful.  Isn't it funny how such beauty can be born from such pain?  Keep writing, you have a natural talent!