Need to know if this poem is any good?

Question

Don't judge

don't judge me,

if you do not know me.

because you have not,

lived a day as me.

don't judge me,

if i look different.

Because you have not,

Gone through what i have.

don't judge me,

if what i do you don't approve.

because you have not lived as i have .

do judge me,

for who i am.

becaues you will have,

been judge for how you judge

Answer 1

On the positive side, you have used the device of "anaphora," by repeating certain phrases such as "don't judge me." That is an effective thing to do in a poem. Your theme is a good one also.

The poem could be improved by watching the consistency of your capitalization and you didn't lay out the third stanza as the others are  (in poetry, form counts). To illustrate this, I refer you to e.e.cummings The Grasshopper. One still must run a spell check.

Answer 2

That poem is really nice. I showed it to my dad, who is a poet and said it was really cool. Keep practising poetry

Answer 3

Pretty good.  I like the message.

Answer 4

i think its great!

Answer 5

Good one. Keep posting them. may you continue to be inspired......

Answer 6

nice..i like how the judge word flows with everything.