Need your Opinion!!! What should I title my poem?

Question

Distress tugs at my heart

like an eager leech

my vision slightly blurs

and it’s hard for me to breathe.

Incapable of saying goodbye

I want to weep, weep and weep--

but I don’t make a sound.

The world falls silent

and I am at a loss for words

unable to understand it

the world seems to spin backwards.

Powerless to gravity

my tears moisten the dirt

as my hands grasp the sweet grass

yet, I can’t make a sound.

As I solemnly lay,

it feels like lavas

flowing through my veins

and my iron heart melts

with each beat it takes.

Oh how I long for the day

when we’ll see each other again;

I will not say goodbye--

I refuse to!

Answer 1

"Loss" - a very nice work, btw.  I envision this as grieving by a grave, simply because of the 'dirt and the grass' and the 'world falls silent' phrases.  Very resonant; well done.

Answer 2

"The Pain of Letting Go"

Answer 3

Motion for return

Answer 4

"never goodbye"

Answer 5

my tears moisten the dirt

that line.... geez. that's good. i really think that'd be a great title.

write in

My Tears Moisten The Dirt

at the top of your poem and see how it makes you feel.

this poem speaks about your loss/pain a lot, and a good word to describe pain is tears.

Answer 6

silence

Answer 7

I would include something about goodbye.  maybe "Never Goodbye" or something like that.  Up to you though, your the one who really knows the mood of the poem

Answer 8

title it      ...   'Silent'

i love the poem by the way...

Answer 9

together

or

again

Answer 10

I have some ideas! Hope you like them!

My Last Farewell

Simply Goodbye

Hearts Inside-Out

My Reasons

Never Say Goodbye

I know they may not be incredible, but what I thought would be nice. And I absolutely love your poem! Take your time picking out the title! It deserves a good one!

Answer 11

I Refuse To Say Goodbye

Answer 12

how about "i will not say goodbye"