New Visual poetry for the poem "Road to No Where"; could you please comment?

Question

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mVn1HdvhapU

would you like your poem posted on the web?

http://www.poetrybysilvertongue.com

Answer 1

It brings up the question - purpose for life.  Maybe - the only reason (or purpose) to living - is to live.  I still think - "do no harm to others" comes into it somewhere ♥

Answer 2

I think this ground breaking way of poetry is very exciting. However, the AV side needs some work to bring it up to the same level as the poetry. Just using the example posted, the speed of the travel was to fast, and therefore became distracting. Also i feel that the visual has to interpret the poem, so in itself it tells "the story" alongside the poem.

It is certainly something i would consider getting involved in.

Thanks for sharing

Answer 3

Wonderful, Has lots of meaning for me, it took me back to my days in Vietnam, a road that lead to no where, since those days it's been like a river to me me running . Really touching with great thought and well organize, A story that should be told and all to listen.

Answer 4

Hmm, Destiny calls us to a no where road of life. I don't know if I agree with that entirely.

Maybe Destiny (our destination) calls the soul to infinity. Is that no where? What's along the way? Without life Destiny would have no entity to call. I believe truth is within consciousness of self. "Not what the eye sees, but that which makes the eye see, that is the spirit." There will always be questions, n'est-ce pas? There are those that have never been spoken. Every answer brings more questions. ad infinitum. I think ours is an on going story. It may be confusing to life's question  when we find  the road  repaved and leading somewhere new. Along the way what other purpose than  to give to others what we've discovered to pursue?

This poem is thought provoking and marvelous.

Answer 5

My system is messed up and I can't get the flash player, though I have tried multiple times.  Please post your poetry here.  I would love to read it.

Tori

Answer 6

I liked.  2 quick edits: Using script letters makes it hard to read. If you want to use script for the title, maybe you the script caps and then a simple font for the rest  (sign guy)  The word "poisoned" sounded strange as it was read.  Either it didn't fit meter or I was just not "tuned" right.  Overall, very visual with the moving road.  My compliments.