New Yubel deck. still sucks but better than my last

Question

i have a yubel deck and its kinda decent cause i know i can bring him back if hes died but i cant find doom shaman anywhere and im not sure if it soly relies on the deck. i think there many different ways to build it and tons of different possibilities anyway heres my deck.plz no bad comments

Monsters

2 Yubel

1 Yubel incarnate

1 yubel ultimate

3 mystic tomatoe

3 dark crusader

2 summon skulls

1 snipe hunter

1 spear cretin

1 felgrand dragon ( calculator on steroids)

2 skilled dark magicians

1 regenerating mummy

1 sangan

1 great maju garzett

Spells

1 foolish burial

1 heavy storm

1 MST

1 monster reborn

1 swords of reaveling light

1 premature burial

1 soul exchange

1 giant trunade

1 brain control

2 lightning vortex

1 shallow grave

Traps

1 escape from the dark dimension

2 compulsory evacuation device

1 divine rath

1 sakueretsu Armor

1 magic cylindar

1 dust tornado

1 raigeki break

1 fine

1 Malevolent catastrophe

thats it. I know it isnt the basic, i would get screwed at a tourny but for now all im going to do is hobby league so what do u think

Answer 1

the only thing i see wrong is MAYBE the summon skulls

and the skilled dark ( altho they are 1800 beat stick )

but then agian i have never played, seen, or heard of anyone attempting a yubel deck so good luck

7/10  

Answer 2

Try my decklist, this is one of my favorite decks. It's really fast and stops your opponent.

Monsters: 20

2 Doom Shaman

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Armageddon Knight

3 Mystic Tomato

2 Exiled Force

1 Sangan

1 Morphing Jar

1 Treeborn Frog

2 The Calculator

3 Yubel

2 Yubel - Terror Incarnate

1 Yubel - The Ultimate Nightmare

Spells: 13

2 Allure of Darkness

2 Foolish Burial

2 Swing of Memories

2 Fires of Doomsday

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Brain Control

Traps: 7

2 Limit Reverse

2 Generation Shift

2 Staunch Defender

1 Torrential Tribute

Total: 40 cards