New a poetry what do you think?

Question

The light of night

Blinded by fear tempted by light

It would take just a cut off the knife

As I sit and wonder what it’s all for

Illusions of love leave me for more

One more day I will wait and see

Maybe she will come home to me

I don’t know her name and can’t see her face

Yet I sit and wait for her gentle embrace

Answer 1

That is very beautiful. It is like a gentle sigh of relief on a day of misery, the thing that I feel after the disaster passes. It strikes a chord in my heart and mind. Keep up the beautiful work!

Answer 2

Very nice. A lil short for my likings; but its descriptive and emotional what I do like in a poem. Keep at it, over time the imagination goes wild and then the real poetry is produced. Have no fear.