New deck not so good so plz help!!!?

Question

ok so me and a long time rival had a high stakes duel where the loser loses their deck. well he won and i had to start from scratch. so im made 2 new decks here is one deck ill post the other later. plz rate i need help.

monsters(20)

-drill bug

-celtic guardian x2

-saggi the dark clown

-mystical elf x2

-lava golem

-luster dragon

-spirit of the harp

-the stern mystic

-white magical hat

-lord of D

-parasite paracide

-toon alligator

-rouge doll

-ghost knight of jackal

-beaver warrior

-dark magician x3

traps(8)

-shadow spell

-ultimate offering

-spellbinding circle

-waboku

-magical hats

-enchanted javelin

-sakuretsu armor

magics(12)

-gracefull dice

-axe of despair

-fissure

-monster reborn

-de-spell

-insect barrier

-words of revealing light

-scapegoat

-exchange

-shooting star bow-ceal

-dian keto the cure master x2

Answer 1

This deck is totally random; a bunch of cards put together. It's practically useless "fixing" this because from the very beginning, your deck has no theme. Sorry man, but if you're thinking of using this, prepare to lose this deck again. I hope the other deck you mentioned is more promising.

Rating:1/10

Answer 2

yeah man this deck is no good u will lose aginst anybody u go against u'll lose against me in the very first few turns with the monsters i have in my decks

Answer 3

That Reeks 0.5/10 (No offence)

Too much Tributes

No theme

Very Random

No Plot

Weak monsters

Too less magic

Too much trap

What's insect barrier doing there?

Many Normal Useless Monster cards

Random Monster,Magic Trap

Your gonna lose in 7  turns

Try buying The Invincible Fortress( $10-$18)

And get your old deck back!

Answer 4

First of all WHY WERE YOU GAMBLING!?

second I am sorry for your loss

third ya shoulda made it 2 outta 3 bud, so you had a chance lol

ok ok. I tried making a deck outta scratch its very difficult. what I always do is get some friends together and put our heads together of what cards you have. make a deck like the stucture decks. notice how the monsters are easy to summon so go out and spend $10 at wal-mart and get your self a stucture deck! i recommend the spellcaster one because some cards in your current deck can be useful. Or if you dont want to spend $10 trade with your friends OR sell to collectors on ebay!

if you want to know I reconmend EFFECT MONSTERS. traps are so-so for what you have right now and get rid of the insect barrier, de-spell and shooting star bow-ceal. see if you can put something to controll your opponents monsters.

But if dont like my advice you can go read a YU-GI-OH beckett thouse have a ton of ideas!