New lyric... Someone comment please?

Question

Another feeling of memories again once lost,

Too many winning’s have come to me at a cost.

The words that come out of you just sound so lame,

I keep on trying to tell you I don’t feel the same.

I feel the cold even more when your not here.

I close my eye’s just to run away from my fear.

The light is closer to me then it’s ever been.

So many pictures of you that I’ve never seen.

I try to make up my mind for what I should do next.

I’m feeling tempted to see you or send you a text.

Another morning of headache’s and swollen minds.

This trek is getting me closer to what I must find.

I still feel I’m walking,

In circles again.

The ground beneath breaking,

Stand tall if I can.

Today I will find you,

Tomorrow’s too late.

I know you can feel me,

You’ll last the long wait.

Now that I’m closer,

To holding your hand.

The feelings are clearer,

I now understand.

I know when I see you,

I’ll smile once more.

The love that we share,

Will last forever more.

Answer 1

nice job. I liked it very much

Answer 2

I like it... it's a little strange to call someone's words "lame" while saying that you've got an everlasting love for them... but, I know and understand the feeling.