New poem, Just wrote it and thought I'd share it.?

Question

seperate and uncomplete

A soul like a dream

Unfinished at the heart

Looking out of his plain eyes

And the feeling feels real

And real feels unaccustomed

Dead and adrift

Waiting for something...

Analysing and obsorbing

Data my senses send

Waiting for a reaction

And I have no clue what to give

Answer 1

Outside the spelling errors (incomplete, absorbing, analyzing), this is really not too bad. Your ideas are solid. You just need to work on your English skills. When you get good, then you can act like nobody cares.

Answer 2

neat man

full of depth and meaning

Answer 3

Extraordinary.

Answer 4

Really lovely!

Keep it up!

Answer 5

nice:) I think you meant to say absorbing though, not obsorbing.