New poem from Jessi?

Question

It's called "Cliche"

It won't fit in this space, so please click the link:

www.jessi675.blogspot.com

and it should be the the one at the top or close.

Your feedback is welcome!

And if you enjoy it, please feel free to read some of the others on the blog and comment on those also.

Thank you!

Answer 1

I did read them... I think you are really young so I'll be gentle.

1.try to expand your vocabulary, reading a lot will do that

2, Every 4 lines leave a space before the next 4 if you can... when you put down so many lines it is difficult to read.

3. Go sit down outside, look around at the things around you, look on the ground closely, look at your surroundings and see how they affect you on the inside. Then write down how you feel in 12 lines or less... it can be longer in the draft, but try to make it no more than 12 when you are through writing

This will help you, and keep writing... the more you do the better you will get. Good luck.