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New poem please be gentle?

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My heart skips a beat when the adrenaline rushes... But my feet dont.. There's no song I don't scream.. No movement I make without sweating... I need no stage for stage presence.. The floor is my battlefield and the battlefield is my playground, my arena, my turf, my stadium. It is my court and I am the judge, the jury and the executioner. Each opponent is a victim as are mine. For I'm bound by the rules of engagement. I am a soldier without a gun.. My body is my weapon and no one commands or holds domain over my actions. I am as free as a bird.. Trapped in this cage of conflict.. I can fly and I'm not afraid to fall.. I know no bounds.. I've been in too many battles to surrender to defeat.. I face death in any situation.. I've killed and been killed.. Blew up and been blown up.. Yet no one has died.. With one gesture I can end it all.. One still moment I can make you stand.. I just need one, one time to prove to you.. I'm one and only, I'm one of many... I'm not alone.. I am what we all are - Bboys

(bboys are male breakdancers)

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  1. I really like it , it flows very nicely even w/o rhyming and not many can do that with free verse and has a beat of its own  


  2. that is REALLY GOOD! what do you think of mine?

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  3. I agree with Jack D...(nice little verse there, Jack...)

    Also...paints a good picture of what's like to be a rock musican on stage...I relate...

  4. A man of many talents. I love it darling. It is very flowy.

  5. A battle of dance

    movements entranced,

    grace engulfing art

    to the beat of the heart.

    ~Baka-desu

    EDIT:  What? I was very gentle. I found your poem inspiring.

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