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Question

never thought I could be

In this place of obsession

always knew I would be fine

if i just tried again for keeps

never knew it would end this way

but sooner or later

selfishness is always re payed

always wanted one thing

the only thing i couldn't have

never wainging never stopping

for anything that maybe in my path

love blinds us even in the best of times

Answer 1

its really swell! man, have you ever thought of writting songs? i think you would be good at that.

i like the theme of the poem...especially the LOVE BLINDS US part. yes its good. really good.