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New poem.... wondering if you guys like it and if it makes sense...Demon or angel who knows for real?

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Demons roam around this little angel

wondering if she is an angel or

if her heart is pure black with hate

They cant pick up if shes an angel

or demon in disguise

but what they dont know

is that her heart is half and half

the right side is angelic like

filled with laughter,childlike behavior

while the left side is pure hatred

filled with hate,evil thorns around the heart

Each moment of her life

its a battle inside her soul

trying to figure out

which will win deep inside

This girl is torn on many things

dont know what to do

Some days shes childlike

loves watching kids shows,

and showing love to others

and then some days shes evil

evil thoughts pop into her head

Remembering bad things happening to her

and yearning to cut again and again

Feeling that urge coming to the surface

bubbling over the edge...till she does it once again

These feelings take over her mind

more and more each day

wondering if her heart is pure evil

and she doesnt know that

And wondering what part of her heart

will win each moment of the day.

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  1. i mostly do not like your wording. i like the concept, or the idea, but it is just the wording that bothers me.

    this piece does make sense to me, but i am far from certain i see it in the same manner as you do.

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