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Question

where do i need to improve

Again and again

I thought I could never see

I thought we would always be

The passion we could have

I wanna put it all in the past

You put my life on hold

And no matter what I was told

To you I would always come back

I kept falling for you again and again

You were the only one

Endless nights I spent thinking of you

And so many times I didn’t know what to do

I couldn’t have you but I wanted you

I longed for you, I needed you

But you were so far from reach

Outta my league above my level

And now months later, outta my life

So I don’t keep falling for you again and again

There’s always a spot in my heart

Reserved for you

No matter how far our lives drag us apart

You are not for me I'm not for you

I thought we were the same but now

I see that’s not true

I fell for you hard

You have no idea

What you meant to me

I feel like a fool

You were my priority

I was your option

I can’t believe I fell for you again and again

The games you play

Answer 1

Sounds like the typical high school heart broken poem done over so many times before.

Keep this poem though for when time goes on and you have forgotten all about this boy, and serious life experience has really built up. Go back and reread this and others you wrote in this fashion and see just how emotional and sad they really are.

Answer 2

do the smart thing a write more and see if you could enter it in a contest ur poem made me cry and not much makes me cry

Answer 3

omg!! i am crying right now for how sweet that was. i wish my boyfriend would be like that please give the world a favor and write more poems.