Not a poet, just needed to get my feelings out. you can comment anything you'd like?

Question

just something i wrote, it may not be very good..but i'm not a good writer and i just needed to get my emotions out.

My heart says try

But my brain says to move one.

I’m falling into pieces,

And my emotions are draining

Loving you has been too hard

And loving you has been too long

When clearly I need you more than you need me

I wish I could stay,

I wish I could keep trying

But my heart just can’t take it;

And my body is brittle

It was a good run,

And fun while it lasted;

But only having part of you is worse than having none.

I need all or nothing-

Because anything else is just too hard

So this is the end,

And I’ll say goodbye

I’ve given up on trying

And I’m done with all the crying;

You were never right for me

And I could never change that,

No matter how hard I tried.

So go after her,

Because I know you love her as much as I love you.

Answer 1

I don't think you need to be a "poet" to express your feelings.

Emotions are something so powerful that just explaining them can make somebody understand, imagine, and feel what you're going through.

And to make someone understand, imagine, or feel what you're saying with words, that makes you a good writer.

I enjoyed reading this, and I hope my comment has helped you see just how talented you are.

Continue writing! and never stop because you think you're "not good enough." We often are our own worse enemies, so don't stop yourself from being amazing. :)

Answer 2

Elisa is right, feelings can sometimes write the poem for you, and you captured that here.  I think this poem speaks to many people and I hope that it will help you find peace.