Not sure if you would call this a poem but I would like your opinion of it

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I wrote this recently but I am not sure it is worthy to be called a poem. However I would still like some feedback on what everyone thinks of it. Thanks in advance for all your comments

I Got a Broken Heart

I remember the day I met her

She was an angel without wings

I was so scared that I couldn’t breathe

She smiled and took away my fears

Her words soothed away all my tears

I got a broken heart

But I have wings

I fly to her in my dreams

Where I hold her tight in the night

And love her with all my might

I remember how I held out my arms

She took me in her embrace

I remember the fear that faded

When she smiled like an angel child

And said I love you baby

I got a broken heart

But I have wings

I fly to her in my dreams

Where I hold her tight in the night

And love her with all my might

I remember our dreams

But then someone saw us

They took one look and took them away

I remember the heartache when she told me

I remember the tears we cried

I got a broken heart

But I have wings

I fly to her in my dreams

Where I hold her tight in the night

And love her with all my might

Now I have nothing but my broken heart

But I still have wings

I fly to her in my dreams

Where I hold her tight in the night

And I love her like the very first time

I got a broken heart

But I have wings

I fly to her in my dreams

Where I hold her tight in the night

And love her with all my might

15/07/08

Written by Broken Heart ©

Copyright 2008

Answer 1

wow. very good. though is sounds more like a song.  

Answer 2

hey i have a simillar one,yours is very good,pls pls read mine and comment pls...very good job i like yours ;),cya

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