OH NO. This can't be happening to me. I need your help. NOW!!!?

Question

Okay...I have to hand this in tommorrow - basically for English we had to design a chocolate bar in pairs and then tommorow we're going to present it to the class, (the design idea, not the actual thing) our chocolate bar is basically an 'eight-piece masterpiece' , each section in the bar having a raised area where theres a different flavour in each one (strawberry cream , peppermint, fudge...etc.)

We need some really good things to put in the description, to say why people should buy ours (its a class competition and the teacher decides who wins)

It doesn't matter whether you actually know what the choc bar's like, just please can you suggest good, fluent things to put in the presentation about why people should buy our choc bar (think about what you'd put if u were trying to sell a choc and tell me)

NO ANSWERS AFTER TODAY(THE 9th). I need them now, please/.

Thank you soo much, it is very, very, very much appreciated.

Answer 1

i don't know if you put this into it but u could say something like fat free every one would like that.......especially with teens. lol. say it's like all your favorite bars in one and resonably priced.

Answer 2

You could call your chocolate bar "Eeny, Meenie, Miney, Oh!"

Or, maybe it's a Choc-A-Lot bar - playing off the idea that there are several choices in each bar.

Or you could have a tagline like: "he sweetest decision you'll make all day." or "so good, so many ways."

There are lots of adjectives to describe chocolate with:

creamy

delectable

smooth

crunchy

tempting

rich

dark

white

sweet

mouth-watering

luxurious

buttery

I hope this helps.

Answer 3

the lad who said choc-a-lot is a genius, but i'd use choc.a.lot cuz its a little more elegant. dashes connecting words usually has something to do with a play on words and that has a connatation of clever, *common* humor rather than sophistication and luxury. make the cleverness subtle : )

gl. its a very good idea, dont sweat it.

Answer 4

Do your own homework. You should've thought about this beforehand instead of leaving it til the last minute!

Answer 5

Tell them it's like a box of chocolates all in one bar. Then try to describe the flavours, strawberry for the summer, mint for the evenings etc.

Good luck, I think the idea is great.

Answer 6

Look at

http://www.hotelchocolat.co.uk

They have some wonderful descriptions.

Answer 7

******take your chocolate fantasy to the next level

diff levels of flavor....