but yahoo kept messing up.. and i guess i deleted it.. that's what it said when i tried to add more details.. so now i have no idea what i wrote because i did it on the spot and my memory isn't that good.. b******s at yahoo.. anyways.. i was adding these details which i have copied and pasted.. for the guy who answered my question. yes you.. this one's for you bill. here
ok i made this big mistake again
when it says my work won't turn away
or something like that
it really means.. hmm let me see
well world instead of work anyways.. thanks for commenting.. but i don't care about getting published.. i had this one poem that really sucked i wrote
Beauty
is what you see
always flowing
in a never ending stream
if at first you miss it
look again
no need to hold onto it
it never ends
so take it in
be one with the stream
always flowing
never ending
in dream
that poem right there.. i sent to one of those things.. then they send me some c**p.. they wanted money.. then they asked permission to put in on a cd. and only 38 poems were on it.. i never got back to them though.. but it's pretty cool cuz i'm sure there was tons of poems.. but i know it wasn't that good. like it was a pop up on this chat site i used to go to.. they'd always have them.. *more on next page*
ok and the more i was gonna write is.. something like this
they'd have things like subscribe to this and subscribe to that. then one day they're like... well i mean a pop up came up that said submit your poem to be rated or something.. and submitted that one.. so i know there was a lot of people so to be one of the 38 poems they wanted to put on the cd was pretty good.. i couldn't afford the stamps to be honest.. to reply to it.. so those b******s.. whatever.. like why couldn't i just say yes in email.. anyways.. i'm really high maintenance
it just was just too much work as it is.. anyways
here's my poem! it's gonna be right this time.. but still S****y because it's not the good version where i cut it off at the first bad line and wrote something way better..
so here it is.. in it's run down.. run out.. S****y existence.. i mean entirety
My Broken Heart
My broken heart won't move
I'm fixed
I need a doll
I need a fix
I need a switch to say to you
what's on my mind, and where are you
I hate you
I hate you
I hate you
Just please
Stop phoning my number
I'm on my knees
Just call me if you want
oh this doesn't make sense
I have room for you
you don't have to pay rent
oh what's this dent
oh what's this dent
who did that to you?
and what's her name?
but we're in love
this is insane
My broken heart
My broken heart
It's not real, it's just fake
I won't give up
My broken heart
where could he be?
it's lost
without you
so say please
and i will do
this move for you
oh this broken heart
just won't do
been gone for days
turn the page
just turn the page
*more on next side*
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