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Ok GOD another try at posting this poem.. i just wrote an alternate ending.. not really.. the first one sucked

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but yahoo kept messing up.. and i guess i deleted it.. that's what it said when i tried to add more details.. so now i have no idea what i wrote because i did it on the spot and my memory isn't that good.. b******s at yahoo.. anyways.. i was adding these details which i have copied and pasted.. for the guy who answered my question. yes you.. this one's for you bill. here

ok i made this big mistake again

when it says my work won't turn away

or something like that

it really means.. hmm let me see

well world instead of work anyways.. thanks for commenting.. but i don't care about getting published.. i had this one poem that really sucked i wrote

Beauty

is what you see

always flowing

in a never ending stream

if at first you miss it

look again

no need to hold onto it

it never ends

so take it in

be one with the stream

always flowing

never ending

in dream

that poem right there.. i sent to one of those things.. then they send me some c**p.. they wanted money.. then they asked permission to put in on a cd. and only 38 poems were on it.. i never got back to them though.. but it's pretty cool cuz i'm sure there was tons of poems.. but i know it wasn't that good. like it was a pop up on this chat site i used to go to.. they'd always have them.. *more on next page*

ok and the more i was gonna write is.. something like this

they'd have things like subscribe to this and subscribe to that. then one day they're like... well i mean a pop up came up that said submit your poem to be rated or something.. and submitted that one.. so i know there was a lot of people so to be one of the 38 poems they wanted to put on the cd was pretty good.. i couldn't afford the stamps to be honest.. to reply to it.. so those b******s.. whatever.. like why couldn't i just say yes in email.. anyways.. i'm really high maintenance

it just was just too much work as it is.. anyways

here's my poem! it's gonna be right this time.. but still S****y because it's not the good version where i cut it off at the first bad line and wrote something way better..

so here it is.. in it's run down.. run out.. S****y existence.. i mean entirety

My Broken Heart

My broken heart won't move

I'm fixed

I need a doll

I need a fix

I need a switch to say to you

what's on my mind, and where are you

I hate you

I hate you

I hate you

Just please

Stop phoning my number

I'm on my knees

Just call me if you want

oh this doesn't make sense

I have room for you

you don't have to pay rent

oh what's this dent

oh what's this dent

who did that to you?

and what's her name?

but we're in love

this is insane

My broken heart

My broken heart

It's not real, it's just fake

I won't give up

My broken heart

where could he be?

it's lost

without you

so say please

and i will do

this move for you

oh this broken heart

just won't do

been gone for days

turn the page

just turn the page

*more on next side*

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  1. FIND A GOOD HOOKER, DUDE. SORRY, BUT MARY MAGDALENE IS NOT AVAILABLE ANYMORE.


  2. I am so glad that God has answered you about your poem. I hope that has helped. Now what exactly is your question?

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