One more, tell me what you think, please?

Question

The suave singer

comes out on the stage

he shows no fear

as the crowd starts its rage

he sings from his soul

he lulls them to peace

he knows how to work them

this fine running beast

he gives them what they want

they give him what he needs

an ear and a heart to listen

to his heart felt melodies

as his voice trails off

the crowd is on their feet

he walks off the stage

feeling, full and complete

Answer 1

not articulate enough.

any high school kid with rhyming skills can write this.

Answer 2

AMAAAZINGGGG!!!!! what a gift

Answer 3

kool keep em going

Answer 4

oooo I like it

Answer 5

Is this like future Shakespeare?

Really Good!

Answer 6

I love it. Bloody brilliant! So evocative and the imagery? Wow! Wonderful work...thank you for sharing!

Answer 7

Pretty nice~ But I noticed one thing, maybe I am wrong, it's just that some lines ended with rhyming with a previous line, but some lines don't. Is there a pattern for rhyming here?

Answer 8

It's cool, but I think the rhyming is off on some words. I use a small paperback Merriam-Webster's Rhyming Dictionary. I have not read any of your poetry that was not beautifully unique and creative. You don't write bad poetry. All of our work needs a  touch up here and there, sometimes. That's why you are posting, right?

Answer 9

Your poem sizes it up about how a entertainer generally feels on stage, great poem!  Cheers!!

Answer 10

lovely!