One more, what do you think ?

Question

Twisted Fairy Tales: Presents

Little Miss Muffet

outgrew her tuffet

and is alergic to curds and whey

she got bit by that spider

and it swelled up inside her

she had to stay in the hospital for days

oh gosh she was mad

at the time that she had

she carried the pain for a while

she smashed little spiders

and ate apple ciders

and couldn't muster a smile

till one fine day

from a land far away

she found her happy tale

she met a man named Peter

He was a Pumpkin Eater

and he kept her very well......

Answer 1

I love it! It`s funny. where you been? I missed you!

Answer 2

So, who's a clever girl then? I think that you have found your strength in this style of writing.

Very clever.

Robert

Answer 3

Yahoo! Answers...where did the talent go?

Is made up nursery rhymes the best you can do, really?

Answer 4

Nice idea, but poorly executed. Needs work.

Answer 5

It's a bit weird but I like it...keep twisting..it's entertaining.