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Question

This is a 2fer... 2 short poems..

Life's Heat:

Day turned to night,

Color turned to gray,

Broken what was whole,

Life's heat to Death's cold.

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Ghosts of the Past:

Close my eyes to sleep at night,

Dreams close in, I wake in fright,

Ghosts grab at me from the past,

They'll haunt me till I'm dead at last.

Answer 1

This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!

Answer 2

They're alright but they don't leave enough to the imagination.  Use more description or figurative language

Answer 3

'Show', never 'tell' the reader too much of anything...let them decide...after all, when you post a poem on here, it becomes the property of the readers on how to interpret it.