One of my newest poems please comment?

Question

The sun crept up on me today

Its orange yellow like stained glass

In the muted sky sounding the battle cry of day,

Wiping sleep from murky eyes.

I am alive again surviving nights constricting arms

And storm flavored kisses.

I rise and greet my time with disdain

As do all dark Angels riding the treadmill

Of anxiety racing into the fiery sky and a life.

Answer 1

Nice. A great vibe for 1:00 in the morning. ;P