Opinion Question: How is this News broadcast i made for civics?

Question

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8zr1jRPh3KY

Answer 1

It is a good effort, however you need to be sitting at the beginning of the broadcast to make it look more professional.

You should also resist the urge to stamp your feet during the delivery, and your diction, and enunciation needs to be worked on.

It does however show promise.