Opinion on poem?

Question

Damned to h**l

Damned to h**l

Think of the moment?

Disease and suffering

Crying and despair,

Dare to think of it?

Damned to h**l,

Regret of your ignorances?

Loneliness and heat

Torment and darkness,

Have you wasted it?

You're damned to h**l!

Damned ot h**l,

Know for it it's all eternity?

Wickedness and sorrow

Agony and death,

Do you know now?

You're damned to h**l?

Answer 1

I liked the repetitiveness, it gave it a cool vibe and a rhythm/beat.

Keep working on it, make each line longer with better, more descriptive words!

Good luck!

Answer 2

meh. When I say it out loud, it sounds hokey. You try it.